the stories are cool...
just one thing> the style of writing is a
lil awkward > not to say negative>
the writer tends to mix his own thought while writing it..so making it feels more like conversation-wise (not whole narrating or re-telling) can be very much smoother with putting in details of the plot and action wise keep the story line straight...but anyhow it vividly described..
a long foreword to readers too hehehe:P