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Title: မင္းသိလား

Tuesday, June 20. 2006

ခံစားမႈ တစံုုတရာကို
တရားသဘင္မွာ စကားပလႅင္ခံၿပီး
ေျပာရမွာလား ရွင္ရယ္…

. . .

စြဲလမ္းျခင္းဆိုတာ…
ဟစ္ေအာ္လို့ လွစ္ေဖၚၾကတာ ရွိသလို
နင့္ေနေအာင္ ရင္ထဲအျပည့္
တိတ္တဆိိတ္ မ်ိဳသိပ္္ၿပီး
ဆိတ္ဆိိတ္ကေလး လြမ္းေနၾကတာလဲ
အမ်ားသားေပါ့။

လူဆိုတာ အခက္သား
မေျပာဘဲ ဘယ္သိမလဲတဲ့၊
ခံစားမႈ တစံုုတရာကို
တရားသဘင္မွာ စကားပလႅင္ခံၿပီး
ေျပာရမွာလား ရွင္ရယ္…

တိတ္တဆိတ္ မင္းအၿပံဳးေတြ
ႀကိတ္ၾကည့္တတ္သူ တေယာက္ကို
မင္းတေန႔ ဖမ္းမိခဲ႔ရင္ေတာ့
ရင္ထဲက မေျပာျဖစ္တဲ့ စကားေတြကို
မင္းတခ်က္ေလာက္ေတာ့ ရိပ္မိမွာပါ
တေပြ႔တပိုက္ ေမတၱာေတြနဲ႔
တိတ္တိတ္ကေလး ျပံဳးေနသူကို
မင္းတေန႔ေတာ့ ဂရုစိုက္မိမွာပါ ကြာ…

ေမဗလပ္(စ္)
mayvelous
20 June 06 – 11:48pm
(Edited spelling mistakes)

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Yayyyy!!!! Mayvelous. you wrote ur poem here

cool

#1 myo (Link) on 2006-06-21 07:52 ( Reply)

i lv ur poem ..
it touched my heart ...

#2 Anonymous on 2006-06-21 09:12 ( Reply)

a yan mite!!!!!!!!!!!

#3 1 on 2006-06-21 10:51 ( Reply)

ကဗ်ာေလး က ေကာင္း ပါတယ္...
စာလံုးေပါင္း သတ္ပံုေတာ့ သတိ ထားသင့္ပါတယ္...

#4 ဒီဝိုင္း on 2006-06-21 11:07 ( Reply)

Thanks for the comments.
Yes I'm sure I got lots of spelling mistakes. Please do correct me.
This is my very first burmese poem and first burmese writing in 8+yr time.
This is also my very first burmese typing test par shin.
A mhar myar shi yin pyin pay kya par shin. Kyae zuu par.

#4.1 mayvelous (Link) on 2006-06-21 14:38 ( Reply)

like ur poem mayvelous & ur page too. Thanx for sharing.

m

#4.1.1 Anonymous on 2006-06-21 19:34 ( Reply)

spelling link

#5 spelling (Link) on 2006-06-22 09:40 ( Reply)

Hey thanks for the fixes.

#5.1 mayvelous (Link) on 2006-06-22 14:09 ( Reply)

ဟားဟား Nice Poem Sis. This is the second time i see your post in Burmese. Keep it up!

#6 NLS (Link) on 2006-06-22 23:42 ( Reply)

kaung dal kha byar, spelling ka ayay ma kyi thint dot bar woo naw...D achain a hti bar tar sa gar tway ka ayay kyi nay ya oo hmar lar byar? yin bat htal ka akyaung 1hku ko 1char yin bat htal yaut pho ka a di ka lo htin hmi par dal...hmar yin lal sorry par.. i ka dot, D poem yat ayathar ko kyite tal....

komyo

#7 komyo on 2006-06-24 02:10 ( Reply)

ႀကိဳက္တယ္...ကဗ်ာေလးကို

#8 shi on 2006-12-07 07:32 ( Reply)

umm
Poem lay ka maso barbu..
kabya shinlay ko mupai swoi ya malu hpyit nyi byi...

tsawra

#9 tsawra (Link) on 2007-08-10 13:57 ( Reply)

ေကာင္ေလးတစ္ေယာက္ကိုႀကိဳက္ၿပီးႀကိဳက္
္ေနရတာခံစားရပါတယ္
ဖြင့္ပဲေျပာလိုက္ပါ
ေတာ့မိန္းကေလးရယ္

#10 ေအာင္ေက်ာ္သူ on 2007-10-10 05:32 ( Reply)

ၾကိတ္ၾကိဳက္မေန့နဲ့ ဗ်ၾကိတ္ၾကိဳက္ရင္ေကာင္ေလးကေမ့လုိက္ေလ့မယ္ေနာ္....အသိေပးတာပါ:Pခံစားခ်က္ေလးေကာင္းတယ္ဗိ်ဴ့

#11 ကၾကီး on 2008-02-20 11:43 ( Reply)

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